Out, out – Robert Frost

The poem:

The buzz saw snarled and rattled in the yard
And made dust and dropped stove-length sticks of wood,
Sweet-scented stuff when the breeze drew across it.
And from there those that lifted eyes could count
Five mountain ranges one behind the other
Under the sunset far into Vermont.
And the saw snarled and rattled, snarled and rattled,
As it ran light, or had to bear a load.
And nothing happened: day was all but done.
Call it a day, I wish they might have said
To please the boy by giving him the half hour
That a boy counts so much when saved from work.
His sister stood beside him in her apron
To tell them ‘Supper.’ At the word, the saw,
As if to prove saws knew what supper meant,
Leaped out at the boy’s hand, or seemed to leap—
He must have given the hand. However it was, 
Neither refused the meeting. But the hand!
The boy’s first outcry was a rueful laugh,
As he swung toward them holding up the hand
Half in appeal, but half as if to keep
The life from spilling. Then the boy saw all—
Since he was old enough to know, big boy
Doing a man’s work, though a child at heart— 
He saw all spoiled. ‘Don’t let him cut my hand off—
The doctor, when he comes. Don’t let him, sister!’
So. But the hand was gone already.
The doctor put him in the dark of ether.
He lay and puffed his lips out with his breath.
And then—the watcher at his pulse took fright.
No one believed. They listened at his heart.
Little—less—nothing!—and that ended it. 
No more to build on there. And they, since they
Were not the one dead, turned to their affairs.

What is this poem about?

The poem captures the brief, albeit unfortunate, death of a young farm boy, whose hand was accidentally cut off by the saw he was working with, resulting in an injury so severe that not even the doctor could save him. Despite his pleas against having the doctor amputate his hand, it gets cut off and it is implied that he dies from excessive pain. While the poem is set in an idyllic, tranquil environment, it builds up to a violent climax, only to end on a note of coldness and apathy that those around the boy – his sister, the doctor, the community at large – show towards his tragic death.


Who is the poet?

Robert Frost is arguably one of the most celebrated American poets of the 20th century, if not of all time. His poems often feature rural scenes and simple, laymen activity, but underneath his stylistic plainness lies a deep symbolism that invites reflection on larger concepts such as life, death, fate, and transcendence. The setting of his poetry is largely influenced by the natural beauty of New England, but is usually generic enough that geographic specificity ceases to become an issue of relevance. His earlier works are the most famous, some of which include ‘The Road Not Taken’ (1916), ‘Out, out’ (1916), and ‘Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening’ (1922).

What does the poem mean? (A line-by-line explanation)

The buzz saw snarled and rattled in the yard

And made dust and dropped stove-length sticks of woods,

Sweet-scented stuff when the breeze drew across it.

And from there those that lifted eyes could count

Five mountain ranges one behind the other

Under the sunset far into Vermont.

And the saw snarled and rattled, snarled and rattled,

As it ran light, or had to bear a load.

And nothing happened: day was all but done.

Call it a day, I wish they might have said

To please the boy by giving him the half hour

That a boy counts so much when saved work.

His sister stood beside him in her apron

To tell them ‘Supper.’ At the word, the saw,

As if to prove saws knew what supper meant,

Leaped out at the boy’s hand, or seemed to leap-

He must have given the hand. However it was,

Neither refused the meeting. But the hand!

The boy’s first outcry was a rueful laugh,

As he swung toward them holding up the hand

Half in appeal, but half as if to keep

The life from spilling. Then the boy saw all-

Since he was old enough to know, big boy

Doing a man’s work, though a child at heart-

He saw all spoiled. ‘Don’t let him cut my hand off-

The doctor, when he comes. Don’t let him, sister!’

So. But the hand was gone already.

The doctor put him in the dark of ether.

He lay and puffed his lips out with his breath.

And then – the watcher at his pulse took fright.

No one believed. They listened at his heart.

Little-less-nothing!-and that ended it.

No more to build on there. And they, since they

Were not the one dead, turned to their affairs.

The buzzing saw made aggressive noises in the garden

From which there fell dust and large pieces of wood

A sweet smell emanates when the wind blows towards it

From that point anyone who looked up would be able to count

That there were five mountain ranges in the distance

Looking towards Vermont under the sunset

Meanwhile, the saw kept making aggressive sounds,

No matter when it had little or more to cut on.

With nothing in particular happening, the day passed by

I wish they would have stopped working

If not just for the sake of letting the boy have half an hour to himself

Which means a lot to a boy when it’s time saved from working.

The boy’s sister stood next to him, wearing an apron

And announced that supper was ready. Suddenly, the saw,

As if to show that it understood what that word implies,

Jumped at the boy’s hand, or appeared to jump at it-

But the boy must have offered up his hand. Whichever was the case,

Both the saw and the boy made contact. But what happened to the hand!  

The boy’s first cry was a laugh of sorrowful regret,

As he toppled violently toward those around him, clutching onto his hand

Partly in urgent opposition, but partly to

Prevent his blood from spilling all over. Suddenly, the boy understood clearly

As he was old enough by then, being a boy

Forced to do an adult man’s work, despite being childlike at heart

He knew all his chances were ruined. “Don’t let him cut my hand off –

When the doctor comes, I mean. Don’t let him do that, sister!’

It was too late, however, before he knew it his hand was already cut off

The doctor anaesthetized him

As he lay there, breathing heavily with swollen lips

All of a sudden, the person paying attention to his pulse was taken aback

No one could believe it when they listened to the boy’s heart

The pulse was little, less, ultimately – none. And that marked the end of the boy’s life.

There was nothing of use from the dead boy. And so, everyone, since they

Were still alive, resumed their normal tasks and carried on living.


What are the poetic devices used?

  • Personification
  • Repetition
  • Irony

Personification
(Attributing human qualities to non-human objects)

EXAMPLES

Line 1:

“The buzz saw snarled and rattled in the yard”

Line 7-8:

“And the saw snarled and rattled, snarled and rattled,
As it ran light, or had to bear a load.”

Line 14-17:

                                 …At the word, the saw,
As if to prove saws knew what supper meant,
Leaped out at the boy’s hand, or seemed to leap-
He must have given the hand…”

ANALYSIS

Throughout the poem, the only reference personified is a violent object – the buzz saw. It is both menacing and active, portrayed as a creature that continuously “snarled and rattled”, which are sounds reminiscent of unpleasant people and venomous snakes. This is foreboding of the gory encounter that will happen to the boy’s hand later, and indeed, the saw is later characterized as an aggressive, pouncing animal which “leaped out at the boy’s hand”, resulting in its injury. The implication is perhaps the lethal, albeit unseeming, potential of manual labour for a young soul, as the boredom of work may quite literally ‘saw’ away the will to live of a boy who should be filled with zest for life (“a child at heart”). [See suicidal point mentioned below in the section on ‘Irony’]



Repetition
(Using the same words/phrases a few times for emphasis)

EXAMPLES

Line 1:

“The buzz saw snarled and rattled in the yard”

Line 7-8:

“And the saw snarled and rattled, snarled and rattled,”

Line 16-19:

“Leaped out at the boy’s hand, or seemed to leap—
He must have given the hand. However it was,
Neither refused the meeting. But the hand!
The boy’s first outcry was a rueful laugh,
As he swung toward them holding up the hand
Half in appeal, but half as if to keep
The life from spilling.”


Line 22-23:

“He saw all spoiled. ‘Don’t let him cut my hand off-
The doctor, when he comes. Don’t let him, sister!”

ANALYSIS

Building on the menacing characterisation of the buzz saw, the repetition of “snarled and rattled”, and the “hand” reinforces the atmospheric threat that encircles the boy. The repetition of the hand hits home just how central the body part is to the boy’s identity – a manual labourer. As such, to part with it would almost undermine his entire sense of self, which eventually does materialise in the form of his death. In a nutshell, without his hand, his existence ceases to possess value, which highlights the fundamental tragedy of this poem, that a young boy’s life should be measured solely by his vocational utility.

Irony
(The opposite of what you expect)

As evident from the repetition of the hand, this body part is seen to be integral to the boy’s existence, as it is the ‘tool’ with which he works and logs. However, this hand is also what ultimately’ ‘betrays’ his life, as the persona speculates that he “must have given the hand” to the saw himself, which carries a faint implication of suicidal motives on the boy’s part. In the same vein, the doctor – someone who is supposed to fend off the arrival of death – is characterised as a sinister figure who administers violence (“Don’t let him cut off my hand”) and ultimately, demise (“The doctor put him in the dark of ether.”)

Both examples of irony perhaps bring to the fore the greatest irony that underlies this poem, that a person who gives up so much of his life should be ‘rewarded’ so thanklessly with a death that is as brutal and cold as the one met by the boy.

How does the poem sound and feel?

There is practically no rhyme in this poem, which lends it a natural, narrative feel, as befitting the casual, anecdotal tone of the persona. The rhythm is also fairly regular, marked by significantly more run-on lines in the early part of the poem, only to disintegrate into short, choppy clauses as the poem progresses, perhaps to highlight the breathlessness of a person quickly inching towards final moments of his life.

Towards the end, almost all the lines are sectioned off by a medial caesura, which read oddly matter-of-fact and unemotional, especially given the tragedy that has just occured. The jarring incompatibility between content and form reinforces the point that an individual’s death poses no impact on the greater social order, as the ones “not… dead” will still “turn to their affairs” and move forth with the natural course of life, despite the minor hiccups of unfortunate events such as the boy’s death.


Attack – Siegfried Sassoon

The poem:

At dawn the ridge emerges massed and dun 
In the wild purple of the glow’ring sun, 
Smouldering through spouts of drifting smoke that shroud 
The menacing scarred slope; and, one by one, 
Tanks creep and topple forward to the wire. 
The barrage roars and lifts. Then, clumsily bowed 
With bombs and guns and shovels and battle-gear, 
Men jostle and climb to, meet the bristling fire. 
Lines of grey, muttering faces, masked with fear, 
They leave their trenches, going over the top, 
While time ticks blank and busy on their wrists, 
And hope, with furtive eyes and grappling fists, 
Flounders in mud. O Jesus, make it stop!

(Source: Collected Poems, 1918)

What is this poem about?

The poem is narrated from the perspective of a soldier caught in the flurry of battle. On a macro level, it describes the hostile atmosphere and frantic activities evident during wartime; on a micro level, it is a cacophonous landscape of military sounds, as well as a poignant vignette of soldiers advancing courageously (but also anxiously) into enemy territory. The poem ends on a note of desperation, with the momentary thought of a soldier hoping that the violence and tragedy of the war would eventually stop.  

Who is the poet?

Siegfried Sassoon (1886-1967) is one of the most well-known British war poets of the 20th century. Having experienced first-hand the gruesome and violent reality of warfare during WWI, Sassoon sought to express his anger and discontent towards war, his disgust towards pro-war generals and politicians, and his sadness over the tragic sacrifices that he witnessed on the battlefield. His most acclaimed poetry centers on war, and often reflects a sense of disillusionment and desperation about human nature and the social situation in his time.

What does the poem mean? (A line-by-line explanation)

At dawn the ridge emerges massed and dun

As the sun rises, the mountain range shows up like a greyish mass

In the wild purple of the glow’ring sun

Smouldering through spouts of drifting smoke that shroud

The menacing scarred slope; and, one by one,

Tanks creep and topple forward to the wire.


The barrage roars and lifts. Then, clumsily bowed

With bombs and guns and shovels and battle-gear,

Men jostle and climb to, meet the bristling fire.

Lines of grey, muttering faces, masked with fear,

They leave their trenches, going over the top,

While time ticks blank and busy on their wrists,

And hope, with furtive eyes and grappling fists,

Flounder in mud. O Jesus, make it stop!

Cast against the fiery purple of a bright sun

Burning slowly through sudden patches of floating smoke that cover

The threatening-looking slope with marks, and one after the other,

Heavy armoured vehicles with weapons advance slowly towards the wire fence.

The artillery fires its guns loudly. Then, with awkward movement, lowers itself

With its bombs, guns, shovels and military equipments,

Which the soldiers edge their way towards and climb onto, ready for war.

Rows of gloomy men speak softly, looking afraid.

They climb out of their low narrow ditches of shelter,

Their watches showing the passing of time in the meanwhile,

And the soldiers wish, secretly and with clenched fists,

While they stumble in mud – that God would put an end to this war!

What are the poetic devices used?

  • Personification
  • Alliteration
  • Synecdoche

Personification
(Attributing human qualities to non-human objects)

EXAMPLES

Line 4:

“The menacing scarred slope”

Lines 5-7:

“Tanks creep and topple forward to the wire.

The barrage roars and lifts. Then, clumsily bowed

With bombs and guns and shovels and battle-gear,”

ANALYSIS

The word “menacing” brings up a sense of threat and danger, which is apt given the abundance of violence, killing and deaths that happen on the battlefield. It is also worth noting the atmospheric contrast that comes with this adjective, as the poem starts by projecting an almost dreamy, idyllic feel (“at dawn… in the wild purple of the glow’ring sun”), only to be abruptly undercut by the sharp reminder of a hostile environment that is both “menacing” and “scarr[ing]”.

The use of verbs “creep”, “topple”, “roars”, “lifts” and “clumsily bowed” serves to mind large animals in the wild, such as elephants (who would lift their trunks) and lions (who are known for their signature bellowing roar). These are also animals that can be threatening to humans, given their force and fierceness. In the same vein, military armaments are being compared to dangerous animals, highlighting the perilous situation that the soldiers are in.

Alliteration
(Repetition of the consonant in close succession)

EXAMPLES

Lines 3-4:

Smouldering through spouts of drifting smoke that shroud
The menacing scarred slope;”

Lines 6-8:

“The barrage roars and lifts. Then, clumsily bowed
With bombs and guns and shovels and battle-gear,
Men jostle and climb to, meet the bristling fire.”

ANALYSIS

The repetition of sibilants (the ‘s’ consonant) mimics the slow, dragged-out movements of the smoke clouds travelling along the mountain edges. The relatively quiet sound of the ‘s’ letter also reinforces the tranquility of early morning, which will later on be drastically contrasted against the harsh cacophony of gunshots, bombings and cries.

As the poem moves into its ‘busier’ section, the kinesthetics of war starts to pile on, and with that louder noises also come to the fore. Marked by the plosives ‘b’, ‘g’ and ‘j’, these consonants emit forceful, abrupt sounds that remind one of loudness and strength. Such qualities are very much characteristic of what happens on a battlefield, considering the plethora of bombings and firings, as well as the vigorous motions of soldiers (“jostle and climb”) in the flurry of war.

Synecdoche
(Using a part of something to represent its whole)

Line 9:

“Lines of grey, muttering faces, masked with fear,”

Line 11:

“While time ticks blank and busy on their wrists,”

With a dehumanizing streak of the pen, the poet ‘reduces’ rows of men into nothing but “lines of grey”, as if underlining (pun intended) just how little identity and individualism mean in the face of warfare. It seems that not even the human body entire matters, given that each soldier is simply referred to in the collective of “muttering faces”, their selfhood taken over by the overwhelming fear of what is to come out of battle – death, carnage and tragedy.

Why does the poet not mention the object ‘watch’, but only points to the underlying idea with the description of “time ticks… on their wrists”? Perhaps the implication is that when one’s existence hinges at the cusp between life and death, material artefacts become so trivial that they are no longer relevant – indeed, are not even worth mentioning. The reference to time passing by quickly may also be a morose nod at the impending arrival of death, which is of course the point at which one’s time ceases forever to ‘tick’.

How does the poem sound and feel?

Rhythm 

The poem’s rhythm is predominantly choppy and quick, with occasional moments of enjambment that appear only at the start. This lays the foundation of a rhythmic drumroll that ultimately builds up to the emotional crescendo of “O Jesus, make it stop!”, as we move from slow sentences that run on from one line to another –

Lines 1-2:

“At dawn the ridge emerges massed and dun/In the wild purple of the glow’ring sun,”

Lines 3-4:

“Smouldering through spouts of drifting smoke that shroud/The menacing scarred slope;”

Lines 6-7:

“… Then, clumsily bowed/With bombs and guns and shovels and battle-gear,”

– to staccato clauses of short phrases punctuated in quick succession, such as “Lines of grey, muttering faces, masked with fear,/They leave their trenches, going over the top,”. As such, the rhythmic pacing of the entire poem traces the emotional and kinesthetic journey of the soldiers portrayed.

Rhyme

The poem’s rhyme pattern is a tapestry of couplets and alternates. While it starts off with a neat end rhyme pair of “dun/sun”, it does not end on a corresponding end rhyme pair, instead having the final couplet of “wrists/fists” be followed by the exclamatory “stop!”, at which point the poem concludes (and thus, effectively ‘stops’).

The simultaneous presence of uniformity and irregularity in rhyme could reflect at once the external similarity that the soldiers share, as they all don the same military garments and carry the same armaments, but also the chaotic messiness that engulfs the battlefield, as men jostle, run and scatter about while weapons fire from all fronts.